Mon Fri 8:30 AM to 5:00 PM ET I do love your posts about quitting the fancy writing, Im certainly not that fancy type. I have a question What do you mean by talking WITH him NOT talking TO him? But I have this ongoing fear that if I write to one readermy favorite readermy ideal readerIll connect with such an infinitesimal group of people. Nothing else. Type the word above*: I use You a bit more than I should in my posts, as in You are loved opposed to I love you. Will work on it:). It feels like you live in my head (in a non-creepy way, of course) because when I revert to using passive voice or pompous-sounding words, I can almost hear you saying, You might want to change that ?. Thank you for stopping by , Wow it does not seem that long since I read a similar advice, from you, crazy how four years can seem like four months. If you find yourself struggling to make sense of your paper or your topic, then it's likely due to a weak thesis statement. . Ill do my best to keep rewarding you with a slice of cake each week . Thank you, Louie. Thank you appearing in my life. Have you read Bird by Bird by Anne Lamott? As I said up front, I always read my copy aloud as I write. Take on any writing project with gusto. Hi! Stay tuned Im developing a blog writing e-course. Really enjoying reading your posts. Thats a big compliment. The problem was that I'm also a reader. a long, chatty e-mail from a colleague. I read that almost two years ago but if I remember correctly, that used a conversational tone. Too hard to read? (see what I did there? :). Yes, thats tricky. Not sure Im quite ready for that yet. It seems that blogs (and email) have spearheaded to drive to conversational writing but its used more and more in books, too. Ive been a bit sloppier with this recently, but a year ago I would religiously check: (a) the average number of words per sentence I would go back to chop up long sentences and tighten my text when my average was over 14 words per sentence. I suggest you do the same. The post itself is written in a conversational tone. In front of my desk. Your drawing is amazing as well. Secondly, engage your readers with questions and the word you.. Im not sure whos happier Henrietta herself or her dog Arthur? You must think of your academic essay as an enterprise by using scholastic writing , Maybe one day I can write and illustrate a childrens book for grown-ups. I guess you could say: Dont be boring!. How do you feel about checking your writing via http://www.read-able.com ? So, your words have to work harder. Hi again, love your drawings. Love how you flipped the idea of writing like you talk and rather to edit your text so it doesnt sound like writing. Your site I enjoy very much. Shall I make you a tea or a coffee? You are spot on, im going to keep the reader in mind as much as possible, i wanted to be the best conversationalist possible! I cant seem to persuade my bosses of the need to switch to personalized writing though, because as they put it its important that as many secondary education pupils as possible should recognize themselves in our texts. I could even hear some dialect in your post, eh? Like "is taken" or "was seen" or "are revealed.". Good writing has a strong voice, where you can hear the writer as if they were talking to you. All the best, Tine. Such projects can feel a bit intimidating. The list of these writers such as Dan Kennedy, Ted Nicholas, Seth Godin, Drayton Bird and many others simply dont write as clearly and succinctly as you do. Yes, thats a good idea. Flows well and easy to connect with. What do you think? ", Try: "The New York Times reports that " or "Research shows that " or "I just read in the paper that 45% of older American workers have physically demanding jobs.". Whilst Ive let go of other writing formalities, these have been particularly hard to let go. If it sounds like writing, I rewrite it. Yes, On Writing is one of my faves, too. Paul, wet and steamy Sydney. Thank you for stopping by . View usage for: Dictating helped him overcome writers block. So are all verbs of being. If you catch one, try to change it. You did it. Thanks. Thank you for all that you do and share. Im glad I kept you reading. Conversational writing is simple and easy to read: Hiut Denims website uses a conversational tone, using short sentences, simple words, and tight writing: We make jeans. Conversational copy is something that *seems* like it should be so easybut it can be hard to retrain ourselves and unlearn what weve learned in school. But writerly exists and simply means of, relating to, or typical of a writer (according to Merriam-Webster). I expanded it quite a lot. Yes, voice is not the same as tone, even though many people use them as synonyms. Thank you also for giving me permission to use but, because, and at the start of sentences. Very inspiring.). Yes, so true. You inspire me to keep writing. But you want your copy to sound friendly. Do you have any specific writing hang-ups I can help with? I hope when I have restored the site it will be better in many ways. Thank you for stopping by, Mihir. It seems to me that if it isnt interesting it wont be informative (dont know where I read that!). Thank you for coming back to reread and comment . Unfortunately, its hard to edit your talking. Hi there! Your comment may be trimmed if it exceeds 500 characters. H. Passive sentences are some of my challenges. Conversational writing is one of my favorite topics. Thank you! Yet it is productive and potentially quite lucrative when you're a copywriter. I don't care how smart your readers are, I promise: They don't walk around speaking in long strings of three-syllable words. Theyre like the chopping and cooking that turns a heap of words into something wonderful (like french fries). Thank you for an entertaining post. Much appreciated . My heart was broken, because I saw her as a sort of bloggy mom. ?) indicate a pleasant amount of impatience? I so agree, Henneke! Yes, language is fun. Now I know what you meant by the tea remark. Do! ~ Elmore Leonard, I think that in all aspects of our digital communications, we need to be more conversational. Great post, Henneke! But it's also putting the pressure on copywriters to make sure their copy isn't just "readable," but that it sounds natural and genuine, too. Hint: The letters above appear as shadows and spell a real word. I wear t-shirts with grammar jokes on them. PS Consider asking your client for examples of conversational writing they like because the interpretation of what kind of writing is conversational may differ from company to company. You see this is the case with novices, mistakes, mistakes and more mistakes. In this thesis, I have made a claim about the theme in Narnia followed by my reasoning. Thank you. This time you really got through to my straight A+ in English brain. Thank you, Jonas. But if the reader isnt, then it can be hard work to simplify your text to make it understandable. Looks for the word are it is not active. Im sure there are many many more. . I think voice is the key to a good writer, and it is not exactly the same thing as tone. No trying to conquer the whole world. Wahoo very great article and your Infographics are very good and understandable. I love your recipes. Maybe I should re-consider the copy on my website as well? I dont read a lot of YA novels. (Im allowed one exclamation pointright?). Brew a cup of your favorite tea. But readers get lost in complicated sentences, and difficult words make them yawn. Hi Henneke, Excellent article. But that wasn't the problem. Im glad you enjoyed this. The web and content format is changing so dramatically, nobody wants to read a wall of text these days! I already hankered for more. Many blog posts lose me after the first couple of paragraphs. I can hardly believe Ive been writing here for so many years. To spot writerliness in your writing, read your copy aloud. I enjoyed drawing the pictures of Henrietta and her ideal reader on the typewriter . All Years Thank you for such an awesome topic. An artist?!? I picked up something new this time. Thats because she feels like youve written for her, personally. Youve heard of the show, right? ", Try: "You can relieve your symptoms instantly with this single pill.". And you can put your feet on the M if you like. Create an account and sign in to access this FREE content. Pour me another cuppa! This is really how it works for me. Im glad youve discovered the power of questions already. But Ive got a question: Im working for a Dutch university. It really felt that personal. And everyone else listens (or ignores you). Excellent advice, Henneke. Another great post. Thanks again, Lisa (PS: Have you read On Writing by Stephen King? And Im looking forward to drink tea with you one day .. ha ha (but not kidding). A MUST!!! Thank you for stopping by. Your email is required but will not be displayed. I hope youll enjoy the snacks, Sergey! Use the following techniques to play with different conversational tones: Ann Handleys tone in her enewsletter is chatty, making you feel like shes a friend: This essay in todays newsletter is shorter + sweeter + more tactical than most. Im sure writing in a local cafe can make your content livelier, too! It makes a claim, directly answering a question and must be very specific, as you can see in our thesis statement examples. In preparation for launching my own blog Ive start reading posts like these, and I cant tell you how much its helping. I, too, have read this one before, felt inspired and benefited, and commented already. Happy writing! But that wasn't the problem. Then she was attacked on fb, and decided to take a break. Happy writing! And like always, your artworks are amazing. Ooh, thanks, I havent read that one. I would be very interested in this. I read many copywriting and business books but few write as well as you do. Passive voice is any form of the verb "to be" (is, am, are, was, were, be, been) plus a past participle of a verb. This language business is awfully fun. And shorter sentences are easier to digest. Your conversational tone kept me reading. So much easier to read. Here are three quick-and-easy fixes that'll get you most of the way there: First, know what it is. You are going to have to take on the title of artist along with writer. And you also change the passive voice to active. Interesting to read your comment about your native Dutch coming out my New Zealand comes out too. Truth is Im thinking about unsunbscribing from a blog for feeling that they care not for their readers. Now you just need a story and title to go with it! Thank you Henneke, this is a sweet post. And while you at it, thank Kerstin for me. Thats a good question! Besides, your book recommendations are terrific. Thanks for yet another great idea. This is not "friendly" behavior when you share an office. Your drawings drive the point home perfectly. This is an excellent article. Your imagery is so funny e.g. As one of my most loyal readers you deserve a real slice of cake some time! Now I know how to do it. I never knew before that writing something, that too conversationally also exists. I appreciate it! I love this post! I often struggle with making my technical content look more informal and interesting but havent succeeded. Much harder. , Oh, yes. although I was old enough to be HER mom. I like the word niggle its also used over here. I think this is because we lash ourselves to certain "rules" of writing we learned in school. So here's what you do: Instead of: "Relief can be had instantly with this single pill. The problem was that I'm also a reader. 3 Quick-and-Easy Tips for Writing "Chatty" Copy By Jennifer Stevens. Thank you for stopping by, Kathy . Blog post writing class?? I spend half of my day reading your tips You are seriously to the point and have informative tips. Its fantastic and really great advice as always. Yes, I think thats the mistake many people make conversational copy *seems* easy because its so easy to read. I still believe this is true. Yes, thank you for your answer and for the examples! Happy writing! I felt like your favourite reader, so you nailed it. Written so nice and concise. And I can picture a Kindle childrens book with those super cute pictures. Houghton Mifflin Harcourt. A perfect snapshot of the copywriters job. Begin writing for money and enjoying the writer's life with AWAI. . What can I say? You are a writerand a darn good one. I hire a professional writer to write our blog, and at times, I have to go in and break up 6-10 sentence paragraphs. That will help keep your sentences shorter. (Here English is unofficially the language of business.). It depends on who you like working with most. At least three times a day I interrupt the stories my children are telling me to say things like, "Johnny and I played on the slide not Johnny and me!" The editing was pretty good so it wasnt noticeable at first but still it something was slightly off. So, yes, as you say, the conversational tone is deliberate and takes some work. To me, B2B is also writing for people, and yes, it can be portrayed in a more conversational way of writing, but not all brand managers like that. Now check your email to confirm your subscription. I had to remove the files. Awesome post . Here's What to Do, I Have Nothing To Say, But Dont Quote Me. . Really helpful. Writerliness isnt in the dictionary. That drawing has again just pinged in my mind, so clean cut very striking. Im feeling super inspired now! They just don't. Thanks so much for your comment (and your compliment! And sometimes it just feels right to start a sentence this way. Happy editing! Success! Had a recent client who insisted, in a snooty curl-in-the-lip manner, that they are a premium brand dealing with professional readers, and so things like contractions, short sentences, using 1st/2nd pov etc. Robert Ringer and Andy Maslen arent among those they write well and are always interesting. You made me think Most product descriptions might be too short to include questions. Trim your sentences and vary their length. Happy new year, Henneke, and thank you so much for your great blog. So you'll know where to go back and fiddle. An example of writing like you talk: Conversational writing feels like the writer is having a conversation with a reader, and you can take two steps to make your writing conversational. Hi, Henneke, You write the best emails with great headlines that always make me want to read your posts. Thanks and keep on giving us more. So, my question is: is it even possible for organizations with so many different target audiences with such divergent interests to find a personal tone of voice in their writing? Brilliant, Henneke! I appreciate it. Because the more spoken your copy sounds, the better it works. Here are a couple of examples: I suppose my real question is: Can premium B2B branding still be portrayed through a more humane, conversational writing? Thank you Henneke. . Thanks Henneke, another keeper of a blog post. If you have trouble reading it, you can use the links to view a new image or listen to the letters being spoken. Thank you for stopping by , Hi Henneke Great post. Below are 15 debatable, supportable, and focused thesis statements for you to learn from. Thanks for germinating and sprouting all these new ideas in my head! When you write for one person, it doesnt mean that only one person will feel youre talking with them. I came back to read it again This gold! When my husband and I lived in Baltimore, we shared an office on the third floor of our 14-foot-wide row house. Thank you, Lucy. Learn more, American Writers & Artists Institute I think it's more important than ever that your copy sound spoken. Good luck with overhauling your website! Call Member Services I write small blogs but with long sentences and I learn a great deal of munching wisdom about how to clean up my writing. I have one doing exactly that. How to use questions as a persuasive technique, http://www.northcutt.com/blog/2014/02/january-resource-round-up-the-best-of-seo-social-media-and-content-marketing/, Slaughter the passive voice. Loved this. Stick to one idea per sentence. I thank you very much and love everything you send me, I love illustration and I will not forget it. Thank you so much, Kate. This "chatty" treatment is boosting response. , Good reminder Henneke conversational writing also very apt for how-to books. I really like the idea of writing to one reader. As Mark Twain put it, "I never write metropolis for seven cents, because I can get the same money for city. Nailed it! And it's accompanied by slides that show the copy going by, one sentence at a time. So I am not suggesting that you cloak your good thoughts in bad English. (And, of course, I the ?!) . When people use apostrophes incorrectly, it makes me nuts. I just wrote a conversational piece today. Thanks for sharing. Yep, conversational writing works for books, too. I read everything I write out loud. Thats it. But as you know if you've ever sat down to write "chatty" copy, it can be harder to produce than you think it should be. Thank you! Especially with technical texts, it can be useful to edit with your reader in mind. Its so nice to have people from across the world joining the conversation here. Signed up for your free course. This is great. Thank you, Paul ? Give me a couple of days and I will get back to normal. Last 300 years. PS Isnt it wonderful how two question marks (? As you can see, there is no universal thesis statement formula as every type of a writing assignment requires a different approach. (Those are sincere) Mary. It still takes work! I will do it in our next post, thanks for pointing out. 866-879-2924 (Toll Free) There was something lazy about the writing. Display Name*: A comet is a bright object with a long tail that travels around the sun. But you sometimes have to override its tendency to mess with your writing style. I just got a reply from a company to write casual content, I was so confused How am I going to do but now I feel a little bit confident I hope I can write well Wish me luck.:). ? Good conversationalists use question marks. (561) 278-5557 or (866) 879-2924, Copyright 2020 American Writers & Artists Institute, 3 Quick-and-Easy Tips for Writing "Chatty" Copy. Passive voice tends to make your writing sound more "formal" or "distant." If you have trouble reading it, you can use the links to view a new image or listen to the letters being spoken. , Thanks for the tips. Also, agree on white space and editing. This was a great read and helpful in a practical way. In other words: Talking TO someone is one-way communication. And they all feel like youre writing for them personally. are improper. Thats great!! I think I will make a few changes in my website. Now, Id like to empower you to find your voice, share your ideas and inspire your audience. , Just tell that high school teacher to shut up with his old-fashioned advice . 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